Ficlet: With a Child's Hand - Supernatural

[katikat]

Title: With a Child's Hand
Fandom: Supernatural
Genre: Gen
Characters: Sam, Dean, Lilith
Words: ~200
Spoilers: Jus in Belo
Summary: Why do you want his soul so much?
Beta: yami_tai *smooch*

"Why do you want his soul so much?" Sam rasped, straining against the invisible bonds that kept him pinned to the wall. His heart ached at the sight of his brother kneeling by her feet where she sat on a throne of white-washed bones.

"It's quite simple," Lilith answered, her child’s hand carding through Dean's hair as if she was petting a dog. "His soul belonged to my son."

Sam raised his eyes to look at her, shocked.

"After I left Eden and went to Hell, I gave birth to many monsters," she continued, voice soft with memories. "But among all the ugliness, an angel was born. His wings were bright like fresh fallen snow and his soul outshone the sun. He longed for the light and he longed for his family. He couldn't have the one without abandoning the other. And it killed him. He died of a broken heart." She cupped Dean's chin and raised it, looking into his clouded, unfocused eyes. Lilith caressed Dean's face gently and he leaned into her small hand unconsciously. "But now I have found him again."

Sam swallowed, his heart racing with fear. But not for himself. "And what will you do with him?"

"He couldn't live in the darkness of Hell…" Lilith whispered then looked up, her eyes shining white. "So I will give him the light."

Comments

0.o

[nereem.livejournal.com]

OMGERZ.

I.

*Blink*

*pokes you with a stick*

I think you should write more. Not neccesarily more of this (because less is more sometimes) but. Uh. Your idea- I'M SO CHUFFED WE'RE FRIENDS, COZ OMGERZ I KNOWZ YOU AND YOU WRITE LIKE THIS! :)

Re: 0.o

[katikat.livejournal.com]

:)) Ouch, not poking! XP

Thank you so much, sweetie! You always encourage me to write more and you make me feel so loved *smoochies*

[layne67.livejournal.com]

That is chilling. Even more chilling, to think of that ... thing, occupying a child's body.

[katikat.livejournal.com]

Exactly. When you imagine such a creature in that innocent girl... *shudders*

Thank you so much for your review, luv! *huggles*

[keire-ke.livejournal.com]

Woah. That's a scary yet real possibility. o.O Greatness! Thanks for sharing.

[katikat.livejournal.com]

And thank you for commenting. I was under the strong influence of one Simon R. Green when I was writing that XP

[lady-macbeth-13.livejournal.com]

Awesome!

[katikat.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so happy that you gave it a chance :)

[blacklid.livejournal.com]

I couldn't resist this. And my face. You should see my face right now.

HOLY COW.

This is awesome. I am pimping this like nuts.

[katikat.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! I'm so incredibly happy that you decided to read this ficlet. And it's terrific that you liked it! *vbg*

[just-ruth.livejournal.com]

Wow. That's quite a punch for such a small fic! Thank you!
(And I love what you did to the scene from 'The Magnificent Seven' for your banner!)

[katikat.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for your kind words :) And I used the Ink Outlines feature in PhotoFiltre to change the pic. That's as far as my graphic skills go ;P

[shadow-cat189.livejournal.com]

Oh wow, that was amazing!

[katikat.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! *blushes*

[lila-blue-b.livejournal.com]

Awesome!

[katikat.livejournal.com]

Thank you! *beams*

[julorean.livejournal.com]

:mems: DUDE. That's just...it makes me all shivery inside, like a bit of horror, but also admiration and a bit of awed fear that it's quite plausible. I like the thought that there was an angel among the monsters. Nice creepy awesome ficlet. :)

[katikat.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for your great review! I think it's awesome and much more creepy that they used a little girl as Lilith's host. It adds this... darkness to fics :)

[diamondback158.livejournal.com]

Oh wow, you've got me very intrigued. I'd love to see this expanded. Cloudy-eyed Dean, mmmm, my favorite.

And what I really love you for... you made is so Lilith wanted Dean's soul based specifically on who/what Dean is as opposed to her just wanting him as a device to use against Sam. Smoochies big time for that.

[katikat.livejournal.com]

Thank you so so much! *beams* I still keep hoping that there will something "special" about Dean too, not just him being Sam's older brother. I mean, he is an awesome older brother, I would just want him to be mythologically special too!

[madame-meretrix.livejournal.com]

oh, what a neat idea! i like that very much. Not only Sam, but Dean, as well, with the secret destiny. thanks for sharing!

[katikat.livejournal.com]

And I thank you for your kind words :) I would love to see Dean be special in some way too :)

[lostandalone22.livejournal.com]

Great story!

[katikat.livejournal.com]

Thank you! *smooches*

[a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com]

Ohhmmmyyyyy...

OHMYYYYYY....

*Sobs*

*Saves*

*Clings to you*

*hugs*

MORE!

[katikat.livejournal.com]

Thank you, thank you! I'm glad that you liked it. It's quite creepy to see a child monster being so intimate with someone, being someone's mother. People watching see just the meat suit, not the entity inside :)