Fic: Owned - WhiCo

[katikat]

Title: Owned
Author: katikat
Rating: NC-17!
Genre and/or Pairing: Neal/Peter
Spoilers: None
Warnings: PWP, graphic sex, kink!
Word Count: ~430
Summary: Written for collarkink, the wording of the prompt itself was X-rated, but basically it said: Peter and Neal have unprotected sex for the first time. And somehow, it turned out kinkier than I first thought...
Notes: Beta'ed by yami_tai - thank you, petal :)


"Look at yourself," Peter whispered, his hot breath tickling Neal's ear, as he thrust into him deeply from behind. He took Neal's chin into his hand and lifted it, forcing Neal to look into the bathroom mirror in front of them. And Neal obeyed and looked.

He looked at his own reflection, at his blown pupils and parted, kiss-swollen lips, at his flushed cheeks and tousled hair. His shirt was rucked up and his waistcoat unbuttoned, his pants and boxer-briefs hanging around his knees. His cock was hard and flushed, scraping almost painfully against the sink that he was gripping with his hands while he felt himself being claimed and filled from behind.

Then he looked at Peter who held him tight around the waist, his left hand teasingly close to Neal's cock. The right hand Peter still kept on Neal's chin, refusing to allow him to look away from their reflection. He held Neal so tight, so close to his chest that Neal could feel Peter's belt buckle rubbing painfully against the back of his right thigh as Peter thrust deep into him in fast, sharp movements, opening him achingly wide with his naked cock.

Peter slammed into him once, twice more, naked skin slapping against naked skin, their breath harsh in the small office bathroom, and holding Neal's look with his own, burning eyes, he came, emptying himself deep inside of Neal. And Neal felt it, the scalding hot, wet sensation deep inside, he felt Peter's cum overflow and run down his thighs in cooling rivulets, marking him...

And Neal's own release followed, bursting out of him and splashing over the sink and the mirror. He came without Peter even touching his cock, pressed painfully against the cool porcelain, just from feeling Peter's sperm inside of his tight walls. Never before had he experienced anything like that, he felt owned, subdued, taken...

Neal's eyes rolled into his head and his knees sagged. He would have fallen, but Peter gripped him tight, still buried deep inside him and hard as a rock. Neal's heart was running wild and white noise was hissing in his ears. But when Peter's breath washed over his ear again, he heard him clearly nonetheless.

"Next time I give you an order, you will follow it," Peter said softly, but firmly, his voice hard and commanding, "or I swear you won't be able to sit down for a week!"

Peter thrust shallowly into Neal, his half-hard cock rubbing painfully against the loosened ring of muscle, and Neal whimpered softly - he believed every word.

The End

Comments

[thefannishwaldo.livejournal.com]

Guh! Something tells me that Neal is now LOOKING for an order he can break without causing too much havoc, but will still make Peter follow through on this promise.

Again, I say, "guh". So hot! And I can totally see them both like this. And I'm left with nothing more eloquent to say than 'guh' again.

[katikat.livejournal.com]

Hehe, thank you! When I first wrote it, I was glad that the collarkink comm was anonymous. Because, eeeeeeep! /o\

[ursula4x.livejournal.com]

I agree. Neal would want that kind of punishment.

[katikat.livejournal.com]

You think? ;) I have no idea how the fic turned out to be this kinky!

[texan-elf.livejournal.com]

Smoke'em if you got 'em! *whew!* That was so amazingly hot.

[katikat.livejournal.com]

Thank you! That was the most graphic thing I wrote in ages. But then I had to go and top it with even kinkier stuff in the collarkink comm. Go figure :P Once the kink!muse was out of the box, I couldn't stuff her back inside!

[asimaiyat.livejournal.com]

Oh, wow, HOT. What a very pretty word-picture.

[katikat.livejournal.com]

Thank you *bows* I always try to give PWPs some... base that anchors it, even if its just a colorful description ;)

[hoosierbitch.livejournal.com]

DAYUM.

GREAT.

*fans self*

Wonderful details, and descriptions. Bravo!

[katikat.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I was kinda not sure if I should or should not post it outside the comm. I haven't written anything this graphic in ages.

[hoosierbitch.livejournal.com]

Well, you should absolutely continue writing this kind of fic for WC! I am a greedy, greedy reader and I want MORE! *grabby hands*

It is weird stepping away from the anonymity of the meme - but man am I glad I can bookmark this fic and keep coming back to it!

[katikat.livejournal.com]

I still haven't let my beta take a look at the pegging fic I posted over there. Oh my, just thinking about it makes me blush *red-faced*

[byrons-brain.livejournal.com]

Yup hot & kinky... love it...

[katikat.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Hehe, the kink was rather accidental this time. This was the first thing that came to my mind when I read the prompt XP

[the-lady-jade.livejournal.com]

Niiiice! And hot! Love it!

[katikat.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I just love dominant!Peter, submissive!Neal!

[wolfmoon8719.livejournal.com]

mmmm um master peter sir,maybe shoving your very nice cock up pretty neal's ass is not an very good incentive for obedience when you give an order,espically when you use bathroom sex as an punishment,on the bright side it makes for good/excellent/porn though.

[katikat.livejournal.com]

Hehe, thank you! I love to write Dom!Peter and sub!Neal.