Oh, man, -- that was really good. Did you add the epilogue since this was originally posted, because I definitely don't remember that, and the story needed *something* more (the last scene I remember reading was Peter finding Neal and El). Very good job, anyway, nice and moody and atmospheric. --Olivia
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Date: 2010-03-11 01:46 am (UTC)Oh, man, -- that was really good. Did you add the epilogue since this was originally posted, because I definitely don't remember that, and the story needed *something* more (the last scene I remember reading was Peter finding Neal and El).
Very good job, anyway, nice and moody and atmospheric.
--Olivia