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"Caffeine for a Marine" by Kiernan Kelly
1 star out of 5
I should've known this would be a disaster when I noticed the author spelled the title wrong. It's a short jerk-off cliché - first time in a public bathroom, a vulgar ex-Marine calling his lover "boy" - better fit for online porn archives. It left me feeling dirty and disgusted. Thank the gods above I was given it for free. If this is a proper representation of Kiernan Kelly's writing then I won't be reading any more.
1 star out of 5
I should've known this would be a disaster when I noticed the author spelled the title wrong. It's a short jerk-off cliché - first time in a public bathroom, a vulgar ex-Marine calling his lover "boy" - better fit for online porn archives. It left me feeling dirty and disgusted. Thank the gods above I was given it for free. If this is a proper representation of Kiernan Kelly's writing then I won't be reading any more.